As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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task response

You need to address the prompt more directly and provide a clear opinion on whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Additionally, ensure that your examples directly relate to the points made in the essay.

coherence cohesion

While your essay has a basic structure, it lacks logical progression of ideas. Work on organizing your thoughts coherently and using appropriate linking devices to connect your ideas.

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Expand your range of vocabulary to convey your ideas more precisely. Additionally, pay attention to collocations and word choices to enhance the quality of your writing.

grammatical range

Pay attention to grammatical accuracy, especially with subject-verb agreement, tenses, and sentence structure. Use a variety of sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammar.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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