The table describes the percentage of employers’ difficulty in recruiting employees in four different fields from 2003 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the proportion of employers’ struggle in recruiting employees in 2003 and 2004 for four different areas which are manufacturing, building, commerce and services.
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of difficulty in finding skilled workers
was much higher than any other group for all sectors.
Difficulty in finding skilled workers
and unskilled workers
generally increased in 2004, except for commerce, which fell in that year. The Commerce group stood at 47% in 2003 and slightly decreased to 41% for skilled workers
as well as
unskilled workers
dropped about 3% in 2004. The other 3 sectors rose slightly around 3-10% for all types of difficulty. Finding skilled workers
’ figures were the highest with all sectors above 40% followed by unskilled workers
at more than 20%.
Finding technical and managerial workers
, on the other hand
, generally decreased. All dropped by 2-3%, excluding the building which decreased by 4%. This
group also
represents the lowest with all numbers being below 15%.Submitted by erniwbs on
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