The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the
amount
of toxic
air
released into the environment in the UK from three various sources in a three-year interval between 1900 and 2005.
Overall
, the total
amount
of
air
contaminants in the UK witnessed a downward trend, which was the result of decreases in the amounts of emissions from industrial and domestic activities.
In addition
, the
amount
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of
air
pollutants emitted from transport vehicles saw an increase, surpassing the industry sector to become the most serious polluter from 2002 onwards. In 1990, about 8
million
tonnes of
air
pollutants from all three sectors were discharged into the environment, which was higher than that from the industry category, at nearly 6
million
. By 2005, their figures plummeted to 5
million
and 2
million
, respectively. The
amount
of toxic fumes released from the transport and household sectors stood at the same level, with each accounting for 1
million
tonnes at the beginning of the period. During the next nine years, the former fluctuated slightly to 1.2
million
in 1999 before soaring to 3
million
in 2005. Meanwhile, the latter remained unchanged until 1999
,
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but
then
fell to almost 0 in 2005.
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