The line graph compares changes in terms of the number of cars owned per household in Great Britain over a 36-year period.

The line graph compares changes in terms of the number of cars owned per household in Great Britain over a 36-year period.
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The line graph shows the average number of
cars
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being used by UK houses in 4 categories between 1971 and 2007.
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, it can be seen that no-car folk saw a dramatic decrease
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families
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that have 2
cars
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tripled.
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families
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with 1 and 3 or more
cars
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remained constant in the whole period. Group without car ownership had the highest rate at the beginning which was about 48 %, and decreased dramatically. Whose figure witnessed at 40% and 30% from 1981 to 1995. In terms of
families
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with 2 machines rose from 8% to 10% between 1971 and 1979. And started continuous rise which totalled 15% in 1985 and saw a peak trend in 2007 with 25%. The figure for
household
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households
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with 1 car was the most volatile. In 1971 it amounted to 45%.
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levelled off throughout the period nearly at 42% and 46%.
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families
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with the ownership of 3 or more
cars
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was the lowest trend. Its rate was 2% from 1971 to 1978. With slight rises, it could reach 6% in 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, families with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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