The line graph compares changes in terms of the number of cars owned per household in Great Britain over a 36-year period.

The line graph compares changes in terms of the number of cars owned per household in Great Britain over a 36-year period.
The line graph shows the average number of
cars
being used by UK houses in 4 categories between 1971 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that no-car folk saw a dramatic decrease
while
families
that have 2
cars
tripled.
Whereas
families
with 1 and 3 or more
cars
remained constant in the whole period. Group without car ownership had the highest rate at the beginning which was about 48 %, and decreased dramatically. Whose figure witnessed at 40% and 30% from 1981 to 1995. In terms of
families
with 2 machines rose from 8% to 10% between 1971 and 1979. And started continuous rise which totalled 15% in 1985 and saw a peak trend in 2007 with 25%. The figure for
household
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with 1 car was the most volatile. In 1971 it amounted to 45%.
Then
levelled off throughout the period nearly at 42% and 46%.
Whereas
families
with the ownership of 3 or more
cars
was the lowest trend. Its rate was 2% from 1971 to 1978. With slight rises, it could reach 6% in 2007.
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