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The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
The given visuals depict how electricity is produced energy from sea waves.
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, the images show the production of environmentally friendly energy, using a device on the seashore, which strains the power of coastal waves to generate electricity. Illustration A shows how a sea wave flows into the inner chamber of
this
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 special device, pushing air into a certain column, thereby starting the rotation of the turbine, which
subsequently
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 generates electricity.
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in picture B, you can witness how the wave recedes, filling the inner chamber with air.
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, the process is continuously repeated over and over again stimulating the turbine to rotate.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wave power
  • Offshore
  • Kinetic energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Buoy
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Carbon footprint
  • Ecosystems
  • Sustainability
  • Energy portfolio
  • Scalability
  • Power grid
  • Marine environment
  • Economic viability
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