The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.
The maps given illustrate the altering of Seatown in the year 1995 contrasting with the current city.
Overall
, many changes experienced in the current city, notably, the fishing port area including the fish market changes to the flats and food courts.
In the year 1995, the city seemed crowded with some trees and forest, there were no a
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kind
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kinds
for instance
, apartment buildings, the
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at
the Change preposition
in
town
only general housing at the west of the
Seatown and a hotel building beside the intersection. Correct article usage
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At
the same year, there was only one cafe across the hotel building.
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In contrast
, the recent town
is more contemporary which is completed with many public facilities and upgrades into
the Change preposition
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town
, whereas
, the prior forest park had changed into a tennis ground and the farmland experienced a development into a golf court, but the most highlighted was the cafe still existed, meanwhile, a great thrive was happened
to the Change to the active voice
happened
has happened
town
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