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The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.

The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.
The maps given illustrate the altering of Seatown in the year 1995 contrasting with the current city.
Overall
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, many changes experienced in the current city, notably, the fishing port area including the fish market changes to the flats and food courts. In the year 1995, the city seemed crowded with some trees and forest, there were no
a
Correct article usage
apply
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specific
kind
Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
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 of house dwellings,
for instance
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, apartment buildings,
the
Correct article usage
apply
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existed
at
Change preposition
in
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 the
town
Use synonyms
 only general housing at the west of
the
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Seatown and a hotel building beside the intersection.
At
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In
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 the same year, there was only one cafe across the hotel building.
In contrast
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, the recent
town
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 is more contemporary which is completed with many public facilities and upgrades
into
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in
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 the
town
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,
whereas
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, the prior forest park had changed into a tennis ground and the farmland experienced a development into a golf court, but the most highlighted was the cafe still existed, meanwhile, a great thrive
was happened
Change to the active voice
happened
has happened
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 to the
town
Use synonyms
.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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