You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The Bar Chart illustrates the trend of how
people
who were born outside and inside Australia
living
in urban, rural, and town between 1995 and 2010.
Basically, Most of the Wrong verb form
lived
people
who were born in Australia
in the mid-nineties prefer to live in cities
rather than towns
and rural areas
. The same trend is observed for the people
who were born outside Australia
. About 60 percent
of non-Australians tend to live in Change the spelling
per cent
cities
and more than 40 percent
of Australians Change the spelling
per cent
lives
in Correct subject-verb agreement
live
cities
. In both cases, people
prefer to live in cities
.
However
, people
living in towns
and rural areas
are comparable less than people
living in cities
. 20 percent
of Australians Change the spelling
per cent
lives
in Correct subject-verb agreement
live
towns
and more than 20 percent
of the Australian Population Change the spelling
per cent
lives
in Rural Areas
. Non-Australians shows
a different trend where 40 Correct subject-verb agreement
show
percent
of the population Change the spelling
per cent
lives
in rural areas
and less than 20 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
lives
in rural areas
.
In 2010, 60 percent
of Australian Change the spelling
per cent
People
were born in Cities
,
and less than 20 Remove the comma
apply
percent
of the population Change the spelling
per cent
born
either in Add a missing verb
was born
towns
or rural areas
. But, Non-Australians were born mostly in cities
rather than towns
and rural areas
whereas
a whooping 80 percent
were born outside Change the spelling
per cent
Australia
living in cities
.Submitted by vigvic013 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, cities, towns, areas, percent, lives with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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