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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the recycling percentage of every family in three various nations.
Overall
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,from the beginning to the end of the period ,we can see a gradual increase in
UK
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 and Germany .
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France
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 shows a downward trajectory.
According to
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 the data provided in the graph,Uk which had 35% in 2005,
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 moderately surged to 40%,
then
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 55% and
finally
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 60%.
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,Germany which contributed for 20%in 2005 ,raised to 55%
at the end
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 of the year.
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,
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 which seems to rank the highest at the start had a huge drop leading to 30%.Following that,a sudden hike from 2013 to 2015
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 40%.
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 has a huge difference of 40% when compared to the past,
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 somehow recouped the recycling process and in 2009 both
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the Uk
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Uk
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 and
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maintained a rate of 40%
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