On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have a travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: 1)describe the lost item. 2)Explain how you lost it 3)Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to write a letter to claim my laptop that I lost
while
travelling.
Firstly
, the colour of the laptop is silver and the name of the company is Dell. Secondly
, the item has a brown leather protective cover. Last
but not least, it has my name on the back in Punjabi language and it also
has few
scratches on the front. Apart from that, the model number is 6667777888 which is unique.
To explain Correct article usage
a few
further
, I was travelling to India on the 28th of July from Canada. Furthermore
, the team leader of the plane notified us to leave our seats as soon as possible because of some issue with the airline. Hence
, I forgot
my precious item on the seat.
At Verb problem
left
last
, I would like you to inform the company about the scenario,
since they found my valuable item. Apart from that, please send me the new gadget as my travel insurance Remove the comma
apply
are covering
all Wrong verb form
covers
kind
of loss. Please feel free to call Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
on
Change preposition
apply
this
number if you need any further
information. I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
GurpinderSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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task response
Make sure to clearly address all the points of the task prompt. In this case, the letter should clearly describe the lost item, explain how it was lost, and state what action the writer would like the insurance company to take.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing could be more formal and respectful to the recipient of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter could benefit from clearer paragraph structure and better use of cohesive devices to connect ideas more effectively.
lexical resource
The writer uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and errors that affect clarity and precision.
grammatical range
While there is a variety of sentence structures used, there are some errors in grammar and punctuation that can be improved.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
