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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The pie chart displays the information about average percentages
in
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 normal meals which contains
Sodium
 Saturated fat, and added
sugar
 which could be cause for unhealthy at high amount of intake. Calibration of meals done in percentage. Looking from
overall
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an overall
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 perspective, it is readily
appearent
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apparent
 that the contribution of dinner in saturated fat
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is
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accountable for
large
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a large
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 portion. The added
sugar
 subscription of snacks
are
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 close to just beneath the half.
To begin
 with,
sodium
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the sodium
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 content of lunch is 29% of the total.
Further
,
considerable
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 portion, just more than
one
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forth
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fourth
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 of responsible
in
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 saturated fat in lunch. The added
sugar
 amount of snacks is 42% when compared to other meals. In
the
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apply
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breakfast,
sodium
 added
sugar
 and saturated fat amounts behave
like
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similar
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 to each other. The breakfast contributes 14% in
Sodium
 and 16% in Saturated fat. The lunch accounts for 29%
in
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Sodium
, 26%
in
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 Saturated fat, and 19%
in
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 added
sugar
 sequentially.
Eventhough
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Even
,
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added
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though added
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sugar
 volume is high in snacks,
Sodium
 and Saturated fat contain 14% and 21% respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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