The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphic illustrates the change
of
various life support sectors Change preposition
in
according to
young european
in the two decades. The analysed areas are health, air Change the capitalization
European
Europeans
quality
, water quality
, food quality
, and people communication. The unit is measured by percentage.
The general trends for rather fluctuative
between the five trends over the years.
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fluctuate
According to
the bar chart, the amount of air quality
is the least to improve. With only
less than Rephrase
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approximate
22% chance of being improved.The second least area which was likely to have a growth was the health and the water Correct article usage
an approximate
quality
sectors, with probability
of 40% Add an article
a probability
the probability
improving
and Replace the word
improvement
60
% contrast of Correct article usage
a 60
declining
over the years.
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decline
In contrast
to most of the segments who
were declining, food Correct pronoun usage
that
quality
and people communication reached its
peak Correct pronoun usage
their
in
around 45% and 63% Change preposition
at
sequentially
. Following Rephrase
respectively
through
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apply
this
, these two areas are the only few areas which were likely to be improved in the next 20 years between the five sectors according to
the european
youngster.
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European
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