You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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particular
how
working adults spend their Change preposition
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time
on extra activities in five decades.
In 1958, Working adults spend
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spent
third
of their Correct article usage
a third
time
on
working and 32 Change preposition
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percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
time
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their time
on
sleeping. Comparing Change preposition
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this
to 2008, people spend more time
on
working(42%) rather than sleeping(25%). The Change preposition
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time
to travel to work also
varies in different time
frames - with 2 percent
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per cent
time
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spend
on travelling to 8 Wrong verb form
spent
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per cent
time
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spent
spend
on travelling.
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spent
time
spent on
hanging out with friends/family in 1958 is considerably higher than the Change preposition
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time
spent in 2008. 8 percent
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the working
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to relax at home in 1958 and comparing Wrong verb form
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to 2008 which is significantly more in number. The time
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