On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have a travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: 1)describe the lost item. 2)Explain how you lost it 3)Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear
insurance manager
,
I am writing Correct your spelling
Insurance Manager
this
latter
to inform you that I have lost my gold chain which was near to my heart on a recent holiday Correct your spelling
letter
in
Change preposition
apply
last
week on a beach near to our town .
The gold chain is of
3 grams Change preposition
apply
moreover
10 dimond
between it which was given by my grandmother, lots of sentiments are attached Correct your spelling
diamond
with
that. It was the Change preposition
to
last
memory of her. Till now it might be
taken by Wrong verb form
have been
some one
from the beach or it got Correct your spelling
someone
coverd
by the sand of the Correct your spelling
covered
beech
. I did not Correct your spelling
beach
went
back to search for it because that place is far from my house. Change the verb form
go
While
playing on the beech it got missed I think so.
However
in my insurance Add a comma
However,
Add a comma
police,
police
it was Correct your spelling
policy
maintiond
all Correct your spelling
mentioned
maintained
loss
at the time of travel will be Fix the agreement mistake
losses
coverd
under it. Just I want to know do you Correct your spelling
covered
required
any documents to show the loss. I will provide Wrong verb form
require
to
you within 2 to 3 days. Hope you will start the claim process as soon as possible. Let me Correct pronoun usage
it to
inform
if there is in trouble. Thank you
Yours faithfully
StevenVerb problem
know
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task response
Ensure to address all three points mentioned in the prompt clearly and thoroughly.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal and structured greeting and closing for the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more formal language suitable for a letter to an insurance company.
grammatical range
Work on sentence structure, punctuation, and use of appropriate grammar for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
