The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Diagram illustrate the complete process of
Rain-
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Rainwater
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water
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harvesting in an
austrialian
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Australian
town. The rainwater falls into the roofs of several houses and it is carefully collected by the drain pipes which will lead its way to
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water
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the water
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filter where
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water
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the water
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filter will remove all sorts of dust from the rainwater and next step is the filtered rainwater is stored in an underground storage.
This
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stored
water
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is
then
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pumped into
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water
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a water
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treatment block where the
water
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is treated with various chemicals to make it affordable to drink.
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water
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is
then
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pushed into the
water
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taps or
water
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aquifiers
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aquifers
directly.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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