The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
The given line chart
depict
the four types of different cargo; road, water, rail, and pipeline (counted in Change the verb form
depicts
million
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Use synonyms
tones
) shipped in the UK between 1974 and 2002. Correct your spelling
tonnes
Overall
, transferring road to Linking Words
UK
showed the biggest Correct article usage
the UK
amount
among Use synonyms
four
, Correct article usage
the four
while
the pipeline in the opposite.
Linking Words
Firstly
, the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
road
sent to Britain was always above 60 Fix the agreement mistake
roads
million
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tones
, Correct your spelling
tonnes
started
from about 70 Wrong verb form
starting
million
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tones
in 1974 and slowly Correct your spelling
tonnes
increased
in the following four years, and it experienced the Wrong verb form
increasing
fluctuative
until achieved Correct your spelling
fluctuating
the
peak rising in 2002 which was up to 100 Correct article usage
a
million
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tones
. Correct your spelling
tonnes
Next,
the Linking Words
amount
of water began from under 40 Use synonyms
million
and Use synonyms
extremely
grew in 1982 Rephrase
apply
in
about 55 up to 60 Change preposition
to
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millions
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million
tones
, and steadily grew, but sharply Use synonyms
deacreased
in 1998 with Correct your spelling
decreased
the
Correct article usage
an
amount
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about
45 Change preposition
of about
million
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tones
. Use synonyms
Sebsequently
, Correct your spelling
Subsequently
trasnporting
rail started from 40 Correct your spelling
transporting
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millions
but always decreased below 40 Change to singular
million
million
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tones
until Correct your spelling
tonnes
rised
again in 2002 which was about 41 Correct your spelling
rose
million
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tones
.
Meanwhile, Correct your spelling
tonnes
pipeline
, in the beginning, showed Correct article usage
the pipeline
the
less Correct article usage
a
amount
which was under 20 Use synonyms
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millions
, and sharply grew in 1982 above 20 Change to singular
million
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millions
but reduced in 1994, Change to singular
million
then
underwent the same condition until 2002 with 20 Linking Words
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millions
Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
tones
.Correct your spelling
tonnes
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