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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or share a home with friends. Some people think it is a positive thing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, in many nations,
teenagers
 decide to leave their
birth place
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after they complete school and begin to live on their own or in a shared home with colleagues . I agree with the statement because of freedom and autonomy
,
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and develop personal growth and exploration.
Firstly
 ,
teenagers
 living on their own can give them freedom and autonomy.
This
 can make them take decisions or risks on their own, and by doing
this
 can improve their skills and gain success in
life
 . Recent studies say that
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over 75% of adults make decisions or take risks when leave their
parents
' home in their teenage . Another reason why I agree is personal growth and exploration. Living
life
 independently can make you think about the future , so a young person who is not dependent on
parents
 or others can grow, make and save money before entering adult age. A recent survey says that around 70% of old people who live a quality
life
 are those who
have
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started growing when they were
teenagers
 .
In contrast
 , living with
parents
 is
also
 beneficial for young people in terms of supervision.
Parents
 can observe and give a better opinion to a child in some
life
 decisions, but
this
 cannot happen throughout
life
 . In conclusion,
although
 some people
believes
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 living with
parents
 can be beneficial . I believe that an independent
life
of
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teenagers
 can lead them to grow and give them a sense of freedom.
Personally
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 I believe that, after finishing
a
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school,
teenagers
 must leave their
parents
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 home as soon as possible, and start
life
 on their own.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • self-reliance
  • personal growth
  • exploration
  • life skills
  • independence
  • friendships
  • social connections
  • beneficial
  • perspective
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