The charts show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate a survey on customer satisfaction conducted by Parkway
hotel
among 100 guests in 2005 and 2010. Capitalize word
Hotel
Overall
, the majority of participants in the survey found the service provided by the hotel
either satisfactory or poor in 2005. However
, by 2010, the hotel
was able to improve its services as many customers expressed positive sentiments about the hotel
.
Focusing on the neutral and negative feedback first,
almost half(45%) of the guests participating in the questionnaire said they were generally satisfied with their experience in the hotel
in 2005 but the proportion of people with neutral comments reduced considerably to 17% after 5 years. While
21% of customers found the services poor, 15% of them were totally disappointed with their stay. These figures, however
, dropped noticeably to 12% and 4%, respectively in 2010.
In contrast
, those who generally enjoyed staying in the hotel
made up the minority in 2005. People who chose the ‘good’ option constituted 14% in 2005, with this
figure further
increasing to a staggering 39% in 2010. Lastly
, only 5% of the visitors were fully satisfied with the hotel
and the percentage of people finding the hotel
outstanding rose significantly to 28% in 2010.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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