The diagrams show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon

The diagrams show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon
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The illustration shows how the cyclical
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process
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a large species of fish called the
salmon
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, the lifecycle is
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process and contains four cyclical phases, starting with
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eggs on a pebbly riverbed and ending with the birth of a new fry.
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with, eggs are produced by the
salmon
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and it takes five or six months for the eggs to hatch into fry. After approximately four years, these baby
salmon
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will live in the lower, faster-flowing waters of their river. During
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time they measure around three and eight centimetres. By the time
salmon
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reach twelve to fifteen centimetres, they are named “smolt”, and at
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time they migrate
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downriver into the open sea. At around five years, the
salmon
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will have grown to become adult size, which is between seventy and seventy-six centimetres.
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begin swimming back to their birthplace and the cycle starts anew.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Spawning
  • Freshwater
  • Juvenile
  • Fry
  • Adaptation
  • Migration
  • Smolt
  • Rivers
  • Ocean
  • Challenge
  • Growth
  • Return journey
  • Hatching ground
  • Perilous
  • Upstream
  • Obstacle
  • Ecological impact
  • Preservation
  • Disturbance
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