The diagrams show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon
The illustration shows how the cyclical
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a large species of fish called the Change preposition
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salmon
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Overall
, the lifecycle is natural
process and contains four cyclical phases, starting with Add an article
a natural
salmon
laying of
eggs on a pebbly riverbed and ending with the birth of a new fry.
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To begin
with, eggs are produced by the salmon
and it takes five or six months for the eggs to hatch into fry. After approximately four years, these baby salmon
will live in the lower, faster-flowing waters of their river. During this
time they measure around three and eight centimetres.
By the time salmon
reach twelve to fifteen centimetres, they are named “smolt”, and at this
time they migrate further
downriver into the open sea. At around five years, the salmon
will have grown to become adult size, which is between seventy and seventy-six centimetres. Subsequently
, they then
begin swimming back to their birthplace and the cycle starts anew.Rephrase
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