Your local municipality is thinking about two different projects for its local residents. An amusement park or a local theatre. Choose between options A and B. Why do you prefer your option? Explain the reasons for your choice, Option A: Amusement Park: The amusement park will be open for families, will have a playground and a water park. Option B: Local Theatre: The local

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