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The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives a breakdown of how European teenagers
forecasting
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 changes will be happening through 20 years in future in 5 different areas.
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, most of them believe things will get worse in all areas except People communication more than two-thirds of them have a hope of seeing an improvement. The worst prediction is referred to the Air quality which
near
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 quarter of them are not optimistic about the situation. The Health and the Water quality have the same expectation that around 40% think that it will be improving during these years
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 nearly the same amount of people
are
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 not have a positive view about
People
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 communication growth. Food quality is an area in which the exact same number of individuals are keeping both sides about what will be happening in the next two decades.

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