The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

The Bar diagram gives

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regarding the

proportion

of

children

, male and female in

UK

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the UK

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,

ate

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who ate

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five types of fruits and vegetables in a day between 2001 to 2008.

Overall

, the diagram showed a stable increasing trend

while

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the female

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female

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females

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had

highest

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proportion

among

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all years. In detail, the pattern of the

proportion

of how many agricultural products are finished by people had

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a

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platinum

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and showed

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increasing trend.The lowest

consumtion

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consumption

year was 2001 between 2001 to 2008.

Children

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the lowest

proportion

. They consumed around 12.5 in 2001.

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men were in the second

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among 3 types of people. They finished around 17.5 in 2001,

while

women ate the most fruits and vegetables. They finish around 22.5 in total. The

consumtion

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consumption

amount of

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males

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and

children

hit

the

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peak

at

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2007.

Children

increased to 26

dramactically

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dramatically

and

male

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males

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rose towards 27. The amount

fruits

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of fruits

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and vegetables

intook

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taken

by female were the largest

among

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in

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8 years. The

proportionof

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proportion

consumed hit the peak

at

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2006, which achieved 35.

Although

the number slightly dropped to 30 in 2008. It was still the highest among

male

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males

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,

female

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females

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and

children

.