The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The graph shows data from 1980 with forecasts up to 2030 on the US population’s
energy
consumption. Overall
, in 1980, petrol and oil
were the dominant energy
sources, while
nuclear, solar, wind and hydropower
were the least utilized fuels. Additionally
, in 2030, gasoline and oil
are forecasted to remain the leading sources of energy
, whereas
hydropower
is predicted to take the bottom-most position.
Over a 28-year period, starting in 1980, petrol and oil
rose in consumption from 35 quadrillion
units
to about 40 quadrillion
units
. Coal and natural gas performed similarly
, as both increased from around 17 quadrillion
units
and 20 quadrillion
units
, respectively, to about 23 quadrillion
units
. During the same period, nuclear energy
gradually climbed from nearly three quadrillion
units
to seven quadrillion
units
, while
solar, wind and hydropower
fuels remained static at approximately three quadrillion
units
.
Over the duration of the forecasts, ranging from 2008 to 2030, petrol and oil
consumption are expected to elevate up to nearly 48 quadrillion
units
. Coal and natural gas are estimated to increase up to about 32 quadrillion
units
and 25 quadrillion
units
, respectively. Finally
, nuclear, solar, wind, and hydropower
energy
will stay nearly constant throughout the projected period.Submitted by shakhusmanhaqq on
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