Owing to modernization, industrialization is at its peak in urban areas
hence
, umpteen numbers of vegetation is being eradicated to replace it with not only residential buildings but
also
corporate skyscrapers.
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growing numbers calls for
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process where vegetation is given priority
instead
of constructing homes.
Therefore
, I firmly believe in upshifting the number of
trees
and
plants
in metropolitan cities.
To begin
with,
although
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in houses and other buildings may benefit people financially
as well as
socially
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,
in contrast
, the spike in
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bodies might result in deprivation of not only economic status but
also
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conditions of the citizens residing in towns.
Therefore
, strict measures must be taken to promote the practices involving
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of numerous
trees
and
plants
to sustain the environment.
Moreover
,
health
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population by businesses and other entities can be mitigated by conserving biodiversity. For
, the factories that are harming the
health
of
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in a city can be minimized by growing ample
trees
and
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building houses and other
.
Adding to it, the issue of searching
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consuming safe fruits and vegetables can
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as folks can enjoy vegetation grown by themselves.
Furthermore
,
along with
humans,
trees
and
plants
also
act as a boon for animals and birds.
the fresh air and the shade from
trees
can impact global warming on a positive scale. To exemplify, by adding more
trees
locals can enjoy fruits from the
trees
surrounding them and birds can find homes in them, enhancing biodiversity.
To conclude
, the cities ought to be restored with the help of umpteen numbers of
trees
and
plants
.
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will
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help to curb the hazardous effects
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the environment by human activities. Benefits from
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the plantation
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of
trees
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from enriching
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, providing organic options for food, providing shelter to birds and many other.