The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows global rates of illiteracy broken down by gender and
also
area for Linking Words
last
year. Linking Words
It is clear that
some areas have a much higher proportion of people who are unable to read or write.
It is interesting to note that approximately half of Linking Words
women
in South Asia, Arab States and Use synonyms
Sub Saharan
Africa cannot read or write Add a hyphen
Sub-Saharan
with
the majority of Change preposition
while
women
in Use synonyms
south
Asia and the Arab states are illiterate. Capitalize word
South
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is compared with roughly a third of men.
In the rest of the world rates of illiteracy are much lower with nearly everybody living in developed countries being able to read and write, falling to approximately 90% in Latin American and Caribbean countries. Linking Words
However
, there are more illiterate Linking Words
women
than men, especially in East Asia/Oceania.
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Overall
, Linking Words
although
there are great Linking Words
disparations
in literacy across the globe, Correct your spelling
disparities
women
are much less likely to be able to read or write.Use synonyms
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