Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives. Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their career. To what extent do you agree / disagree?

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In today's world, a debate has sparked with regard to employment. Some individuals believe that
people
must stay
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only
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same occupation for a long period of
time
meanwhile some think employees should change their
job
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jobs
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atleast
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at least
one
point during their line of work.
As per
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my opinion, more than staying focused
in
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one
job
for a long
time
,
people
should explore their options or follow their passion
therefor
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therefore
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I believe that
people
should
atleast
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at least
try changing their occupation at least
one
time
during their career journey. In
this
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I will
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elaborate
two
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reasons to support
on
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what extent I agree followed by a conclusion.
To begin
with,
a
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stable work of
employement
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employment
is a must for every person to earn an income to run their lives. Choosing the correct line of work
mostly
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based
due to
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various types of social and financial aspects.
However
, as per my
experience
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experience,
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the community in my country
measure
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measures
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social status purely based on the
job
.
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most
of
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the
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people
do not get the ability
of following
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to follow
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what they desire because they are
compleled
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unable
to do what society thinks. In my perspective, I completely disagree
on
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choosing a
job
or staying in an
employement
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employment
based on the community desire. In a nutshell, staying in the same
job
for a
longtime
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long time
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might result in
job
dissatisfaction and it can cause danger to mental health.
On the other hand
, changing a
job
will help
people
to explore new pathways in their
career
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careers
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. Some
people
might have a passion
to run
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their own business
some day
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someday
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and it should be encouraged.
For instance
, an accountant who has a passion
in
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photography might want to start his own photography studio and
completly
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completely
change
the
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job
. Perhaps,
this
allows a person to
bare
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new duties and follow what he/she
desire
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desires
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. In conclusion, every
job
should be considered as a learning curve
therefor
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therefore
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I
belive
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believe
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changing jobs
atleast
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at least
one
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once
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time
in the career ladder would bring
self satisfaction
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self-satisfaction
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. The choice of changing
employement
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employment
will bring more experience to an individual compared to sticking
into
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to
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one
job
.
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