The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.
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Youngsvillein
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Youngsville in
Newzealand
from1980
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from 1980
to 2005.
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, industrialization has driven the city to
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natural
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environment
, and the need for building more factories and skyscrapers. By taking a quick look at the map, we can tell the railway has been constructed to the north. The locations of hospital, school and airport have not
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over time, but most of
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places has been diminished. Houses and
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envirnment
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environment
has been replaced by skyscrapers,
warehouse
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and factories
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south
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of River Alanah. On the north side
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the river, new
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recreational
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been built
such
as the Stadium. There are two new parking spots in the south and west of the stadium
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one of them is near the lake.
Also
, by cutting the trees around the lake down, a new space for other
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activities
like swimming and sailing has been provided.
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