59.The diagram presents how pulp and paper are made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graphic illustrates the
process
of making Use synonyms
pulp
and Use synonyms
paper
.
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Overall
, is an 11-step, man-made and linear Linking Words
process
for both products. The products come from trees, ending the Use synonyms
process
with Use synonyms
paper
bales and Use synonyms
paper
rolls.
First of all, the trees are cut down, and for the good of Use synonyms
this
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process
, only tree logs are needed. Use synonyms
Then
, chips should be bought from other places, and the logs are chipped, after, they pass through a digester and a washer, so they are in the conditions that are needed, and the pulps are created. The pulps are cleaned and washed and heading to the Linking Words
pulp
screen resulting in a clean Use synonyms
pulp
.
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Furthermore
, the Linking Words
pulp
can be processed into two types of Use synonyms
paper
. To create rough Use synonyms
paper
for boxes, the Use synonyms
pulp
is put into a Use synonyms
pulp
former, and they are dried and go to the Use synonyms
pulp
reel, after they pass through the cutter, they become Use synonyms
paper
bales. Use synonyms
Moreover
, for creating refined Linking Words
paper
for printing, the clean Use synonyms
pulp
is put into the Use synonyms
pulp
cleaners, they have cleaned passes through the dryers, the pulper passes through presses and Use synonyms
paper
presses, so it has the Use synonyms
paper
shape and is dried and Use synonyms
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finally
the Add a comma
finally,
paper
rolls are ready for sale.Use synonyms
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