59.The diagram presents how pulp and paper are made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graphic illustrates the
process
of making pulp
and paper
.
Overall
, is an 11-step, man-made and linear process
for both products. The products come from trees, ending the process
with paper
bales and paper
rolls.
First of all, the trees are cut down, and for the good of this
process
, only tree logs are needed. Then
, chips should be bought from other places, and the logs are chipped, after, they pass through a digester and a washer, so they are in the conditions that are needed, and the pulps are created. The pulps are cleaned and washed and heading to the pulp
screen resulting in a clean pulp
.
Furthermore
, the pulp
can be processed into two types of paper
. To create rough paper
for boxes, the pulp
is put into a pulp
former, and they are dried and go to the pulp
reel, after they pass through the cutter, they become paper
bales. Moreover
, for creating refined paper
for printing, the clean pulp
is put into the pulp
cleaners, they have cleaned passes through the dryers, the pulper passes through presses and paper
presses, so it has the paper
shape and is dried and finally
the Add a comma
finally,
paper
rolls are ready for sale.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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