You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents •say what action you want the post office to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. My name is Lovejit Singh, and I applied for a job. So, I chose your courier service to send the documents. I am writing

this

letter to let you know about those official forms that I posted but have not received yet.

Firstly

, when I sent the document

then

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the staff members told me that it would reach the destination within one week.

Although

, the week is already completed my papers have not reached the preferred location.

Moreover

, my joining date is 16th November for a new job and it is mandatory to receive the documents before

this

date.

Furthermore

, I attached the receipt with

this

email. It is my humble request to you please take immediate action so that the paper will reach its destination within two days.

Otherwise

, I will miss my career opportunity. Yours faithfully, LS

Submitted by tajinder.panag on Sat Nov 11 2023

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task response

Ensure to clearly state the specific details of the situation, such as the date and location of posting, and the contents of the documents. Also, request for a specific action in response to the situation.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate but could be more formal in tone. Additionally, the transition between the details of the situation and the desired action could be smoother.

lexicla resource

The range of vocabulary used is adequate, but could be enhanced by using more formal and specific language related to postal services and document transmission.

grammatical range

There are several grammar mistakes in the letter, such as incorrect verb tenses and sentence structure. It is recommended to review and revise the letter for grammatical accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

149 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

postal service
registered mail
tracking number
envelope
urgent
confidential
compensation
investigation
documentation
destination
customer service
resolution
discrepancy
correspondence
delivery
timeline
claim
follow-up
liability
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