The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The graph below
The given line graphs illustrate the rate
change
in Use synonyms
cost
of three different metals Add an article
the cost
such
as Linking Words
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
, and Use synonyms
zinc
during Use synonyms
12
months of 2014. Correct article usage
the 12
Overall
, all of the categories faced a fluctuation Linking Words
on
each month, especially for Change preposition
apply
Nickel
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
Nickel
once had the highest figure in early 2014, but became the lowest in the rate of Use synonyms
prices
Fix the agreement mistake
price
change
among other types of metals.
In the first half year, Use synonyms
Nickel
Use synonyms
has
the highest rate Wrong verb form
had
for
Change preposition
of
6
% Correct article usage
a 6
change
in regard Use synonyms
of
price, before facing a downward trend, Change preposition
to
drop
to 1% in March and continuously Wrong verb form
dropping
to
rapidly falling to the lowest at -3% in Change preposition
apply
June
. As Use synonyms
oppose
to Wrong verb form
opposed
Copper
and Use synonyms
Zinc
, where its Use synonyms
change
Use synonyms
are
less dramatic. Change the verb form
is
Copper
started at 2% Use synonyms
change
in cost Use synonyms
at
January and began to slightly decrease to almost -1% in Change preposition
in
June
. Use synonyms
Zinc
, Use synonyms
on the other
Linking Words
hand
Add the comma(s)
hand,
start
Wrong verb form
started
with
1% and began to surge by 3% in the next month before gradually Change preposition
at
fall
to -1% in Wrong verb form
falling
June
.
In the second half of the year, Use synonyms
nickel
prices continue to decline until Use synonyms
it
show Correct pronoun usage
they
a
progress Remove the article
apply
in
the end of the year Change the preposition
at
for
1%. The same goes for Change preposition
by
zinc
, where its cost is Use synonyms
surge
to 2% in December. Whilst, Wrong verb form
surged
copper
prices almost Use synonyms
remain
stable after Wrong verb form
remained
June
with only Use synonyms
0,5
% Correct article usage
a 0,5
Use synonyms
change
to Correct your spelling
chance
finally
Linking Words
reached
almost 2% Wrong verb form
reach
at the end
of Linking Words
period
given.Correct article usage
the period
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words change, copper, nickel, zinc, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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