The pie charts below show the propotions of visits to Ireland last year by age group, and by gender and type of visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two

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charts give information about visits to Ireland

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year by age group and by gender,

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by type of visit. In general, we can see that older

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visit Ireland more often than younger

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, in the second

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chart it can be clearly observed that, Ireland was visited by more males than females by both types. It is apparently seen that

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teenagers and the most old

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visit the country by same number. Almost a quarter attended 25-34

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and 45-54

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, which is the vast majority result. 35

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old

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occupy only a small minority and 11 per cent

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years

old humans who attended the country. It is worth noticing that, an insignificant minority part

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the

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chart,

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per cent was frequented by men, and a small portion

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of men

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attended

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the business reason. It is clear from the data

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tiny fraction

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of women

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attended

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the same business

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like

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men. And only 40 per cent

females

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of females

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had arrived

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leisure

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