The charts below show the proportion of people’s spending on different commodities and services in a particular European country in 1958 and in 2008
The pie chart represents the percentage of people’s spending on housing, clothing, entertainment, food, travel/ transport, luxury goods in a particular European country in 1958 and in 2008
As the graph shows, the figure for housing, food, luxury goods,
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and travel
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the number of clothing was the highest in 1985. After 50 years, the value of housing was higher than the data for clothing.
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housing increased substantially from 22% to 32%. There was a slight growth in the figure for food from 8% to 19%. The tally of travel/ transport went up Correct article usage
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by 7%. The proportion of luxury goods witnessed a considerable rise from around 7% to 17%.
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, there was a rapid decrease in people’s spending on clothing from 32% to 12% during the period. The declined slowly from 18% to 16%Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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