You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it? Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
I am writing a letter to inform about my
papers
have been left in one of yours
Correct pronoun usage
your
cab
.
Since I was travelling for a business meeting on Friday I used the Uber Fix the agreement mistake
cabs
taxi
LED-345. However
, I use
my own car but Wrong verb form
used
that
time I hired Change preposition
at that
taxi
for a meeting. Add an article
a taxi
Besides
this
, I was preparing minutes
of Correct article usage
the minutes
meeting
in the cab so I correctly remembered that
I put that file on the back seat.
The importance of the file is that it includes the financial history Correct article usage
the meeting
as well as
new project details.
These are not only import
Replace the word
important
papers
for my meeting but it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
depends of
my next promotion. Change preposition
on
However
, the driver's number is switched off and I am trying to reach out but unfortunately
I fail.
I would request you to please locate your driver's car and give back my personal documents. Add a comma
unfortunately,
Furthermore
, you can also
track his taxi
and call him to drop my papers
at my home I will give give fare to him. If you track the taxi
then
you will say to him that he drop
my Wrong verb form
dropped
papers
at my home.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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Coherence and cohesion
The response should be more formal, and the content needs to be more relevant to the task. Ensure that the letter matches the tone and style required for a formal letter.
Coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of the letter needs improvement. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and the ideas should be logically linked throughout the letter.
Lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and accurately. Avoid repetition and use formal language where appropriate.
Grammatical range
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors and lacks control over a wide range of sentence structures. Work on using varied sentence structures and language accurately.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.