The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate the development of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, the city had developed from a mainly farming area into a residential area.
In 1930, a road
was connecting north
Correct article usage
the north
side
of the city to the south side
, and this
road
was still existed
in 2010 with two extensions on the right, and two others on the left. The Change to the active voice
still existed
existed
road
was crossing River Stroke with a bridge on the north. The farmland that used to be located on northeast
and southwest was completely removed by 2010. In 2010, many houses had been added at the Correct article usage
the northeast
side
of the road
.
On the east side
of the road
, Primary
school was developed and the size is almost doubled compared to 1930. Gardens that used to be located on the east Correct article usage
a Primary
side
of the road
was
demolished to make way Correct subject-verb agreement
were
to
the development of Change preposition
for
extension
Correct article usage
an extension
road
and retirement home. On the west side
of the road
shops Add a comma
road,
was
removed, but the post office was still located in the same place in 2010.Change the verb form
were
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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