The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

The maps illustrate the development of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.

Overall

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, the city had developed from a mainly farming area into a residential area. In 1930, a

road

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was connecting

north

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the north

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side

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of the city to the south

side

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, and

this

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road

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was still existed

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still existed

existed

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in 2010 with two extensions on the right, and two others on the left. The

road

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was crossing River Stroke with a bridge on the north. The farmland that used to be located on

northeast

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the northeast

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and southwest was completely removed by 2010. In 2010, many houses had been added at the

side

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of the

road

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. On the east

side

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of the

road

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,

Primary

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a Primary

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school was developed and the size is almost doubled compared to 1930. Gardens that used to be located on the east

side

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of the

road

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was

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were

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demolished to make way

to

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for

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the development of

extension

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an extension

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road

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and retirement home. On the west

side

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of the

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road

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road,

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shops

was

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were

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removed, but the post office was still located in the same place in 2010.