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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Miss Merry, I am
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Akanksha
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, I am one who is using your community hall for the music practice.
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 am writing
this
 letter to tell you that our
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full
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 band of 20 people are fully
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 on your place for
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the reherseal
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reherseal
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rehearsal
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 of music. Our band group is not harming
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any one
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anyone
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.
this
 is teaching
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students
awerness
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awareness
 and how to get peace of mind.
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 our art culture that we want to give to the next generation. and
also
 for the best
music
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music,
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 we received
lot
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 of
price
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. so many countries
aprishiating for
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 what we are doing. If
its
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 not possible
meet
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 on
tuesday
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Tuesday
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 and
frieday
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Friday
friendly
 please allow us
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other
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 day and time of the week we will do our practice
according to
 that. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully, Akanksha
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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