The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that the principal aim of science is to better individuals' lives.
This
essay completely agrees with Linking Words
this
statement because Linking Words
scientist
carry out activities that solve problems caused by humans and allow Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
people
to have a better life.
Trying to improve the economy of the countries, Use synonyms
lead
to huge Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
damages
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damage
in
the planet. Change preposition
to
During
large Change preposition
For
periods
of Fix the agreement mistake
period
time
, Use synonyms
scientists
have been looking for solutions to issues caused by humans, Use synonyms
such
as global warming and contamination. The aim of solving these problems is to offer a better environment, so Linking Words
people
can have a good income and at the same Use synonyms
time
enjoy Use synonyms
the
nature and Correct article usage
apply
a
better air quality. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, Linking Words
people
in Spain like to go to parks and gardens in their free Use synonyms
time
, since the city Use synonyms
center
is full of pollution and the quality of air is very poor.
During the Change the spelling
centre
last
decades, new Linking Words
diseases
and illnesses have been found. Use synonyms
Scientists
play a very important role Use synonyms
at
creating vaccines and medicines that can heal different Change preposition
in
diseases
. If treatments for Use synonyms
diseases
are found, Use synonyms
people
can be healed quicker and do not need to suffer symptoms of illnesses, Use synonyms
also
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individuals'
can live for a longer Change noun form
individuals
time
. Use synonyms
For example
, approximately four years Linking Words
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, Rephrase
ago
people
around the world got Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
Covid-19
, when it first Correct your spelling
COVID-19
appeard
, many Correct your spelling
appeared
people
died because there was not treatment, but after several months, the Use synonyms
scientists
created vaccines which reduced Use synonyms
number
of deaths.
In conclusion, Change the article
a number
the number
scientists
look for solutions for problems that humans face, Use synonyms
such
as climate change or contamination, Linking Words
also
, they are the ones Linking Words
incharged
of finding and creating medicines for Correct your spelling
in charge
in charged
diseases
that Use synonyms
people
may suffer, and I, Use synonyms
therefore
, believe that the primary aim of Linking Words
scientists
is to better Use synonyms
people
's living conditions.Use synonyms
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