The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart displays the proportion of men and women in four countries in Asia
which
are living in cities between 1970 and 2020 and their estimated percentages for 2030 and 2040.
Correct pronoun usage
who
Overall
, the proportion of people that
living in cities in Malaysia and Indonesia increased dramatically; Correct pronoun usage
apply
therefore
, these ratios for Thailand and Philippines
rose significantly. All countries' values that are included will increase Correct article usage
the Philippines
at the end
of the period.
Malaysian population
who are living in the cities is starting
the period at 30% and Wrong verb form
started
this
climbed to just over 40% in 1990. During the period of 1990-2000, Malaysia is overtaking
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overtook
Philippines
as the first-ranked country before rising sharply to around 70% in 2020. Correct article usage
the Philippines
After
this
growth
it is set to grow moderately to over 80% until the years 2030 and 2040. Indonesia followed an upward trend from the beginning at over 10% to Add a comma
growth,
a
half of the Correct article usage
apply
population
between 1990 and 2020. After
this
expantion
, it is predicted to reach just over 60% in 2040.
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expansion
explanation
Philippines'
value was just over a third in the starting point and Correct article usage
The Philippines'
then
increased to almost a
half of the Correct article usage
apply
population
in 1990 before receding to roughly 40% in 2010 and 2020. Therefore
, it will rise slightly to just over a half in 2040. On the other hand
, Thailand's value saw a noticeable increase of 10% after two decades, beginning with just under a fifth of the population
. In addition
to this
it remained relatively stable at roughly %30 from 1990 to 2020 and it is estimated to rise sharply to just below 50%.Add a comma
this,
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