The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
amount
of critical crimes Change the quantifier
number
that
recorded in Correct pronoun usage
apply
Londan
Correct your spelling
London
from
2003 and 2012.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, the figures for armed robbery decreased dramatically while
the number of assault cases saw a noticeable increase throughout the entire period. In addition
to this
, the amount of murder remained relatively stable between 2003 and 2012,
The amount of armed robbery cases was 3,500 in 2003 which increased to nearly 3,750 in 2004 before dropping dramatically to just above 1,000 in the next 4 years. It rose to just below 1,500 in 2009 and then
remained relatively stable at this
level until the end of the period.
The figures for assault was
approximately 2,300 at the beginning and Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
it fluctuated between just below 2,500 and just over 2,000 between 2003 and 2009. Moreover
, in 2006s, it replaced armed robbery as the most significant crime. After the fluctuation, it saw a noticeable increase of almost 500 in the next 3 years. The figures for crime
of murder hovered between just over 500 and nearly 900 cases from 2003 to 2012.Add an article
the crime
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