The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The graph
belows
shows data Correct your spelling
below
of
a report in 2008 about expenditure of Change preposition
from
energy
in the USA from 1980 to planning in 2030.
Overall
, whereas
the
fossil fuel included: petrol and oil, coal, and Correct article usage
apply
gas
was
the majority, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
renewable Correct article usage
apply
energy
consist
of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower was just a minority. In general, there was Wrong verb form
consisting
a
upward trend in all types of Change the article
an
energy
.
In 1980, with 35Q petrol and oil were dominant energy
using, more 15Q and 20Q than Gas
and Coal respectively. The quantity of petrol and oil seen a
Correct article usage
apply
fluctuate
until 1995, before Wrong verb form
fluctuated
increase
sharply to 50Q in 2030. Wrong verb form
increasing
Similarly
in
the amount of Change preposition
apply
Gas
, witnessed a little change in the first 35 years around 20Q and there was a slight decrease in the figure of
Coal. Meanwhile, coal was expected to climb by 5Q since 2015 up to 30Q, Change preposition
for
the
total of natural Correct word choice
and the
gas
will remain unchanged at 25Q until 2030.
On the other hand
, at
the starting pointChange preposition
apply
about
, Change preposition
apply
the
renewable Correct article usage
apply
energy
have
Change the verb form
has
a
same figures at 40Q. Correct article usage
the
In addition
, the quadrillion of nuclear [Verb missing] slowly growth
during 50 years from 4Q to 7Q in 2030/ . Over the 30 years, there [[verb missing] a continuous change in Solar/Wind and Hydropower, after that, the expanse (wrong meaning] of Solar/Wind was predicted will stable at 6Q and Hydropower’s figure return to Replace the word
grew
a
ordinary point.Change the article
an
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, q with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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