Tak 1 The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The two plans

illutrate

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the proposed renovation of the university's

sport

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centre.

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, the outdoor court

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been completely demolished.

Gym

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will undergo the exoansion

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pool

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the pool

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, seating , changing room and reception stay in the same location. Two dance studios and changing rooms will be established in future.

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lesure

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leisure

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and sports hall will be added as new facilities. Currently, there are two

iutdoor

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outdoor

courts which are located right and left

side

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of the 25m

pool

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. The

entrabce

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entrance

face towards the reception which has located south

coner

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corner

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pool

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. A single changing room and

seatings

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are located facing towards the

swimmimg

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swimming

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the proposal, only the 25m

pool

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seating and

changing

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room will remain

unchange

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unchanged

. The most significant development will be the establishment of

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pool

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, sport hall and dance studios. The gym will

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further

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expansion.

Sport

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A sports

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shop and cafe will be added beside the entrance

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reception at the original location. New changing rooms will be built

south west

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southwest

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and

south east

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southeast

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coners

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corners

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of the complex.

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task response

Answer the essay question more comprehensively. Include detailed comparisons of the before and after plans and focus on the main features of the renovation.

coherence cohesion

The essay lacks a clear introduction and conclusion. Additionally, the organization of information could be improved for better coherence and flow.

lexical resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but some technical terms related to sports facilities and renovation could be included for better lexical resource.

grammatical range

There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing throughout the essay. Work on sentence structure, verb tenses, and punctuation for better grammatical range.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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Tak 1 The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Fully explain your ideas

Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers. What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Social media have a negative effect ,Do you agree or disagree.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

More and more people today expect to get what they want instantly ( goods, services, news), without having to wait. Why is this? Do you think these expectations to get things instantly is a positive or negative development?