Academic - Task 1 The twp maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Academic - Task 1

The twp maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The both
Remove the article
Both
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maps display the changes of
acess
Correct your spelling
access
road
Fix the agreement mistake
roads
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to a
city
hospital in 2007 and in 2010. In 2007, the
city
hospital had only one direct access
road
from the
city
road
.
Further
, there was a single
car
park
which was common to staff and public.
This
car
park
was located between
city
Correct article usage
the city
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hospital Ring
Road
and the
City
Road
. Vehicles
was
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were
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able to
entered
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enter
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the
park
using the North opening which was directed to the Ring
Road
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the plan was to improve the
road
access to the
city
hospital. The
car
park
was separated into two different locations and several
roundabout
Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
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have
built
Add a missing verb
been built
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. Especially, the bus station re-located near
by
Change preposition
apply
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the hospital. In 2010, the bus station
has
Verb problem
was
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brought to
right
Add an article
the right
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side of
the
Correct article usage
apply
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Hospital
Road
.
Moreover
, it contains two direct access to both roundabouts. There are two
separated
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separate
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car
parks
allow
Correct pronoun usage
that allow
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to
Verb problem
apply
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park
staff vehicles and public vehicles at different locations.
However
,
entrance
Add an article
the entrance
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of both
car
parks faced towards the Ring
Road
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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