The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
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The line chart shows the number of
goods
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transported by four different modes in the UK between 1974 to 2002.
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, it can be seen that the amount of
goods
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transported increased except for
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transported by railway. The quantity of
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transported by railway experienced a gradual fall from 1974 to 1986, and
then
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it fluctuated around 30
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tonnes
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until it started to rise again in 1994. In 2002 it reached the same amount as in 1974
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40
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tonnes
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. Road and water are two modes that experienced a significant rise around the period. In 2002, over 90
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tonnes
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of
goods
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transported by road and over 60
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tonnes
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transported by water. The usage of
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for transporting
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increased dramatically from 1974 to 1982, it stood at around 25
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tonnes
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and remained unchanged until 1990. It
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dropped to 20
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tonnes
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in 1994 and remained constant until 2002
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • amount
  • transported
  • UK
  • increased
  • significantly
  • 28-year period
  • first decade
  • steady increase
  • significant jump
  • highest point
  • gradual decline
  • minor increase
  • dropped
  • similar level
  • goods
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