Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Human populations have a big impact on

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which would decrease the bio-diversity and the extermination of species.

This

is mainly because of the deforestation and illegal hunting. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with the extinction of

animals

.

Firstly

, the reason why

ecosystem

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would

loss

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of

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species, is

due to

deforestation.

In other words

, the world’s population is growing, and demand is growing with it;

hence

some rainforests must make way for

agriculture

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plantations.

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, a rainforest

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located in Johor had been used for building an aquafarm.

Thus

, the depletion of forests would lead to the extermination of some

animals

.

Secondly

, poaching

also

would lead to the dilemma of losing bio-diversity. When predators

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several specific

animals

such

as elephants,

rhino

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rhinos

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, and bears for illegal

transaction

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, it would reduce the numbers to the endangered levels. There are two measures to handle

this

issue. One of the effective

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is that local authorities must control the area of logging.

That is

to say, stricter laws should be introduced to warn those logging companies and act as a deterrent.

For instance

, harsher fines and punishment can be imposed for those who overcutting.

As a result

, it may play a great role

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this

issue. Another

steps

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is that some related awareness campaigns can be organised by the government bodies or some environmental organisations with the aim of protecting the species and environment.

This

is because the campaign can help people to strengthen

the

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awareness of preserving the earth and

animals

, and teach people how to protect the

animals

by

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products from

animals

especially

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ivory and horn.

To sum up

, introducing strict laws and organizing some related campaigns are the solutions that can be applied to combat that serious conundrum. If people and governments collaborate

on

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eliminate

this

problem, the extermination of

animals

can be declined.