The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. relevant. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
The line graphs compare the information about the number of
books
read by men and women between 2011 to 2014 at Burnaby Public Library.
To sum up
, In 2011 women were more interested in reading books
in contrast
to men. However
, by 2014, the data changed showing more number of gents involved in reading compared to ladies.
Firstly
, A
reading Habits of females Correct article usage
The
has
declined over the years. It was around 4000 number in the beginning which peaked at 10000 in 2013 and gradually decreased to 8000 by the end of 2014.
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Secondly
, men have cultivated the habit of exploring through books
. Initially
, it was 2000 which dramatically increased up to 14000 by 2014. In 2012, it was 4000 and grew up to 10000 by the year 2013. However
in the year 2013, the amount of time spent for looking through Add a comma
However,
books
by both were at an equal state.Submitted by noorainfatima135 on
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