You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how cheese is made.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the detailed process of making
cheese
. It can be seen that the stages consist which start with the raw milk and end with the ripened
cheese
.
Firstly
, the procedure starts with
the
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apply
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raw milk, which is pasteurized to kill the
bacterias
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bacteria
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.
Next,
the pasteurized milk has
standardizated
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standardised
and
filtarted
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filtrated
filtered
, which
help
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helps
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to
curdling
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curd
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the
cheese
. As soon as the
chesse
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cheese
cutted
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cut
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, they
stirring
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stir
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and
cooking
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cook
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until it
will be
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is
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a curd.
After
this
stage, the
preparing
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prepared
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cheese
is milling and
salting
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salted
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to develop its
flavor
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flavour
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.
Then
, we
pouring
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pour
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te
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the
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product into
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the mold
a mold
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mold
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mould
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, and the machine
is pressing
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presses
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them.
Finally
, we
ripening
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ripen
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the chees for hours and
then
,
as a result
, we have a ripened
cheese
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cheese production
  • raw milk
  • pasteurization
  • harmful bacteria
  • rennet
  • starter cultures
  • coagulation
  • curds
  • whey
  • heating
  • pressing
  • molding
  • aging
  • salt
  • packaging
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