The chart below shows purchase levels of four meats in the UK from 1974 to 2011
The chart illustrates the rate of buying four types of meats in the UK between 1974 to 2011.
Overall
, beef has
Wrong verb form
had
a
highest point Change the article
the
between
others Change preposition
among
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
year
, but experienced a decline almost twofold. In contrast
, chicken was growth
steadily and hit a high of approximately 250 grams, which is Verb problem
grew
the most
significant than others.
Rephrase
more
To begin
, four kinds of meat have different started
Wrong verb form
starting
point
in the first Fix the agreement mistake
points
year
, whereas
, the
beef was the most popular and Correct article usage
apply
the
fish was lessen-opt to buy, Correct article usage
apply
however
, over the
time Correct article usage
apply
the
beef experienced a fall, Correct article usage
apply
then
from 1999 to 2004 replaced by the
chicken meat as the highest.
Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, in the year
1979, the lamb straight to a
decrease but in another Correct article usage
apply
year
which is in 1989, the lamb was experienced a rise, however
, the ward tended to more erratic because the ward changes
slightly Wrong verb form
has changed
frequent
over the past 25 years.Change the word
frequently
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