The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the layout of the
road
leading to a city
hospital in two different years, which are 2007 and 2010. Overall
, in 2010, the
access to the Correct article usage
apply
city
hospital has undergone
several changes, the most significant of which Wrong verb form
underwent
are
Wrong verb form
were
established
Correct article usage
the established
roundabout
and more parking Fix the agreement mistake
roundabouts
space
.
In regard to 2007, which only Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
had
one parking space provided for staff and Verb problem
apply
public
Correct article usage
the public
at
the east Change preposition
on
od
Correct your spelling
of
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
that leads to ring
Correct article usage
the ring
road
where the city
hospital is located at
. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, there once were many trees planted along the side of the hospital road
and all had been
uprooted in Wrong verb form
were
the
2010.
Change the article
apply
Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
in
three years later Change preposition
apply
after
2007, there Change preposition
in
are
two roundabouts constructed, where the first one Wrong verb form
were
is
in the middle of Wrong verb form
was
city
Correct article usage
the city
road
and the other installed
to the north of the first one through the hospital Add a missing verb
was installed
rd
, and both of them had access to Correct your spelling
road
bus
station. Add an article
the bus
In addition
, at
the west of Change preposition
to
hospital
Correct your spelling
Hospital Road
road
there is Add a comma
road,
bus
stationAdd an article
a bus
the bus
,
and Remove the comma
apply
staff
car park on the east. Meanwhile, Correct article usage
a staff
for
the public car park, Change preposition
apply
it
is relocated to the east of Correct pronoun usage
apply
city
hospital.Correct article usage
the city
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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