The charts below show the proportion of people's spending on different commodities and services in a particular European country in 1958 and in 2008.
The bar charts below illustrate the percentage of six different kinds of personal expenditures in one specific European country in 2 years 1958 and 2008.
According to
the data, the expenses of housing, travel and luxurious goods saw a considerable rise during the period Linking Words
while
the other three factors namely food, clothing and entertainment observed the opposite pattern when the figures decreased slightly.
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It is clear that
people spent most of their income on accommodations when the rate increased moderately from 22% to 32%, followed by the growth of the transport budget with nearly 10% higher in 2008 compared with 1958. Linking Words
In addition
, we can see that there was a rapid rise of 10% in the expense of luxury products. Generally, it was Linking Words
equal
10% increment for all three segments
Correct article usage
an equal
On the other hand
, there was a remarkable plummet of almost 20% in people's spending on food in 2008. Linking Words
In contrast
, the clothing and entertainment sectors witnessed a minimal decline of approximately 2% and 7% respectively.Linking Words
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