The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the infotmation by selecting and reportying the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.
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Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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, but old persons will come closer to adult folk with their 42,3% versus 46,2%.Add an article
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