The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the infotmation by selecting and reportying the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the infotmation by selecting and reportying the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.
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us
information
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on the ages of the populations of
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Firstly
, we can see that
Yemen
's
population
in
2000
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year were mostly from 0-14 aged
kids
.
This
is
a
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50,1% of
all
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the
population
. 15-59 years old people make up 46,3% of the country's
population
. 60+ aged persons
stays
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at
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third place with 3,6% of the country's
population
.
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to
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2050
about
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Yemen
's
population
looks different
than
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statistics in 2000. Most changes between 15-59 aged and 0-14 aged
peoples
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people
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. Adult persons would compose the vast majority. There is a big difference between
Yemen
and Italy's
population
value
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values
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. In 2000 origin country of lasagna
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inhabited by
the
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15-59 aged folk. It was
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61,6% of the total
population
of
nation
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the nation
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.
Kids
between 0 and 14 were 14,3% of the total amount and older
peoples
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people
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were between
kids
and adults with 24,1%. Projections for 2050 in Italy
doesn't
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look similar to
2000
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the 2000
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year.
Kids
will keep the
last
position in
chart
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, but old persons will come closer to adult folk with their 42,3% versus 46,2%.
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