You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you could start

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
letter to explain my interest.
week I saw your advertisement on social media,so I applied for a part-time job at your football club My name is Sevinch.I am 18 years old. Nowadays I am a student at university so I am going to work for your football club.
In particular
, I have had a good experience in
sport type. Not only that I have got a lot of gold medals from football competitions.
In addition
, I am a very hard worker and brilliant person
in other words
I can control many students I look forward to receiving your reply.I hope you can employ me. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully Sevinch
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task response
Expand on your experience and special skills related to working at a football club. Provide specific examples of your skills and how they would benefit the club.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter needs improvement. Please organize your ideas into clear paragraphs and use appropriate linking words to improve coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and try to avoid repetition. Be mindful of the appropriateness of the language used for the formal context of the letter.
grammatical range
Pay more attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Review the use of articles, prepositions, and punctuation for accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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