The chart below gives infomation about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reposrting the main features, and make comparisonss where relevant.

The chart below gives infomation about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reposrting the main features, and make comparisonss where relevant.
The given graph illustrates data
regard on
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regarding
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how households spent their weekly earnings on 8 different domestic expenses in one
perticular
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particular
country between 5 decades.
Overall
, in 1968
higher
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a higher
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number of weekly salary was spent on basic needs
such
as food, housing and clothes
whereas
in 1968, weekly income was mostly spent on leisure,
accomodation
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accommodation
and transport. In 1968, 35% of the weekly wage was spent on food, 10% on
accomodation
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accommodation
and clothing, 7% on domestic,personal goods and for traveling. Nextly, 8% on holidays and
lastly
, fuel and power (6%) was the least spent category in 1968.
On the other hand
, in 2018 a higher portion of income (22%) was spent on holidays, 18% on house rent, 16% on food, 14% on transport, 8% on household goods,clothing and
footware
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footwear
, fossil fuel and personal items
expenditue
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expenditure
was less than 5% . In
contast
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contrast
, the portion spent on household
good
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goods
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remained
unchaged
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unchanged
during the years.
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